David Mascellani
08-08-2003, 05:01 PM
Firstly, I hope you enjoyed your birthday the other day.
Secondly, I'd like to pat you on the back for all the hard work you have been doing. I have been browsing around the forums lately
and I have noticed that you have posted crits in General, both the C&Cs, in Scansion Mansion, Love, Experimental,and High Critique. And I must say that I like your style of critiquing.
You are harsh when harshness is warranted and kind when kindness is needed. You also, more often than not, not only
point out the problems in a poem but also provide suggestions
as to how the poet might rectify those problems. Good work.
Secondly, I'd like to pat you on the back for all the hard work you have been doing. I have been browsing around the forums lately
and I have noticed that you have posted crits in General, both the C&Cs, in Scansion Mansion, Love, Experimental,and High Critique. And I must say that I like your style of critiquing.
You are harsh when harshness is warranted and kind when kindness is needed. You also, more often than not, not only
point out the problems in a poem but also provide suggestions
as to how the poet might rectify those problems. Good work.