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Gabe1
12-21-2004, 05:54 PM
by Sylvia Plath


I'm a riddle in nine syllables.
An elephant, a ponderous house,
A melon strolling on two tendrils.
O red fruit, ivory, fine timbers!
This loaf's big with its yeasty rising.
Money's new-minted in this fat purse.
I'm a means, a stage, a cow in calf.
I've eaten a bag of green apples,
Boarded the train there's no getting off.

Tony Smith
12-21-2004, 06:36 PM
Congratulations, Gabriel! When are you due?

Gabe1
12-21-2004, 08:18 PM
Heh.

Steph#2
12-22-2004, 09:58 AM
Gabriel,

Sylvia thinks in metaphors as easily as I tie my shoelaces.

But I’m not envious.

Steph#2
mutter, mutter, curse, curse.

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